Technical Description

The purpose of this memo is to discuss how I have learned from the mistakes in my Technical Description paper and how I will fix these mistakes in the future. Part of the course learning outcomes for this course is improving the revision process. I will discuss my current strategies and how I plan to fix them. 

After receiving initial feedback for each draft, changes were made with minimal effort. When asked for more information, additional research was not done. At most words were changed around to give the illusion that the paragraphs were changed. For example, the history portion of my paper was noted to be too short for its own section and that more should be added. I did not allot time for this research and thus did not make any changes to this section.  

In the future I plan to change this approach. I would make sure that additional research is done when necessary. I would give the necessary time for the revisions, so that I can make sure the final draft of the paper is truly the best draft.